Good, nice beat. I like the scratch sound you use. the bass sound later on is good as well. The song is pretty repetative, so I would probably call it trance, instead of techno, but what ever you want to call it is fine. It is catchy and i think you made it just the right length. Any longer would be very repetative. good wark, keep it up
what do you use to make your music? i use ACID Pro 4.0 to make mine. maybe we could make a decent one together if you use the same program. peace, Brandon aka HM18
So far, I like it, kind of calm and mysterious. you chose some good synths. I like your choice of drums, but it kind of gets repetative (like my some of my songs).
I like the slow moving melody in front of the drums, it gives a mystical feeling. Not very action packed, but still a wonderful track. It all builds up kind of slow, leaving you on the edge of your seat, then settles down, a little disappointing, makes you want it to bust out all fast.
nice ending, settles down nicely.
that was an over all wonderful track, you really have a talent for this, i think the score is less than you deserve. keep it up, man
Yeah, it's, again, one of those spookier, quieter songs. Glad you like it.
I'm currently working, actually, on a five-part song titled Atmosphere... I think you'll like parts of that one, too, though it's going to be very diverse in genre. =D
Thanks for the review! :)
good beginning. i like the kick and the synths in the background. The song is building up. very nice style at the fast part.
Second build up. I like your choice on the synth. It all comes together nicely. You have just the right ammount of countermelodies going on. I like your rave style on this song. I think the piano could be a little louder. The song is pretty much one tune that is built upon and added to. Nice key change. nice ending. I like how it all reverbs into the ending resolution.
I enjoy your style and listening to your music. I hope i can learn a few tips by listening to your music. I also hope that we can keep reviewing each other's music as it comes out.
Job well done,
Yep, gotta love that style at the fast part. I actually think I had too many harmonies there... but one less and it would be too few. >_< The piano definitely should have been louder, but I was afraid of it overtaking the melody. =\
Actually, I beg to differ on that one tune. The melody is completely absent in the introduction, and the two parts where it plays, save the point where I loop the first part to add to the buildup. I can see your logic in places, though.
I also would have to agree about the ending, I thought it was very fitting. It's getting faster, and faster, and faster... and then you suddenly stop and the song leaves you behind and rushes off into the distance. =D
Glad you like it! I share those hopes... let's both keep at it. Send me PMs when you have a song you want me to review, I'll do the same with you. =) Thanks for the review!
great stuff going on
You really have some good stuff going on there. I love the bassline. The part where the drums come in is frikin sweet! this is great work for a second song! i see potential. use your imagination and keep rockin
ha, i have many more made now, they are just higher quality and are longer, if you have msn or yahoo, ill send you the longest song i have and i warn you to not have your bass up all the way or itll blow your speakers, i about did to my 360 watt sony. heres my contact info... email@example.com and firstname.lastname@example.org you keep on rockin too dude!
Nice use of pads. I like the piano riff a lot. It is very good and artistic, but it is lacking in its captivation. It indeed is very creative, because not many people would take their music in this direction. A very calming piece, kind of eerie at the end. Keep up the good work,
Captivation? Yeah, I guess I know what you mean, but this song isn't supposed to be excited or exciting. It's supposed to be eerily calm. Floating in space, viewing spectacles, like I said in the description. ;)
Glad you like it, thanks for the review. :)
job well done!
Very catchy tune. I like how it all builds up and refers to the origional riff often. I especially like the beginning. You obviously put some time into this piece and it shows. There's not too much going on at once, as is the case with a few of my songs. I think it would keep me captivated more if the building stretches were diverse, it seems like they all sound the same. But over all this is a masterpiece! I look forward to listening to more of your music and to reading your responses to my new music,
Glad you like it! Actually, I'm surprised you think a lot of effort went into this - I feel I could have put more. =\
Thanks for the review, glad you like it! =)
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